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Виктор Шамонин-Версенев Сказки в стихах

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Дорогой русско-язычный читатель и пользователи сайта!

 

Когда воспитываешь ребёнка правильным, грамотным, литературным языком, то вырастая, ему (уже не ребёнку)

легко и просто

переходить на вульгарный, похабный язык. Но, к большому сожалению, не бывает обратного!

С вульгарного, похабного языка, ему тяжело переходить на нормальный, выше сказанный, язык.

Большинство избегают этот «процесс» и используют тот

язык, который в него «впихнули»!

 

Не знаю, как в Лирике автора В.Шамонина-Версенева, но в Детской тематике, в сказках в стихах,

сплошной блатной жаргон.

https://lit-salon.ru/users/593/content/stihi

Например

 

Шалунишка заяц тот,

Завтра снова он придёт!

Изловлю его,как пить!

Языка мне не носить! (век воли не видать)

 

А вот, что такое "как пить" я (и не только я) не смогу объяснить ребёнку!

 

"...деньжат срублю" (Шабарша)

 

"ПРО МЕДВЕДЯ-ПРОСТАЧКА" СКАЗКА ВСТИХАХ

 

"Жить малиной просто срам",

 

Лично я не буду, ни читать, ни давать слушать своим внукам (внучкам) эти сказки стихах!

 

И это не только моё мнение. Я прошёлся по интернету и читал под сказками аналогичные комментарии.

Вот один из многих комментариев

 

Виктор Шамонин-Версенев "Страшный заяц" Сказка в стихах

Комментарий

Елена Черникова

 

http://neavtor.ru/read?id=492664

 

ЕленаЧерникова

 

- Да барашка вот варю,

Я мясцо, лиса, люблю!

 

Это не для детей стишок)

Это для какого возраста?)

14 сентября 2017 в 8:23

 

Здесь получается, что собрат из собрата суп варит!

Собратья едят собратьев

(не говоря уже, (по технике письма) что слушатель слышит

 

ДАБАРАШКА ВОТВАРЮ)

 

И вот ещё = Стихи для детей!

 

"По тропинке с ним попёр" это как?(никак по фени ботаем)

 

Словарь Ушакова = попру, попрёшь, прош. вр. попёр, попёрла, совер. (прост. вульг.).= перевести, что такое «ВУЛЬГ»?

 

комментарий от Татьяна Спика

 

http://fotovideoforum.ru/topic5737-20.html

 

Виктор_Шамонин_Версенев

"Шабарша"

 

Начала читать дошла до чертенка из пруда, с дедом и с угрозами от Шабарши...

И что-то мне эта ситуация, вдруг, напомнила : АХ!. Так это же "Балда"....

 

А может кум его иль сват? И стало скушно тут же слушать, ну а тем более читать. sad

Такой вот забавный плагиат

 

Дорогой русско-язычный читатель и пользователи сайта!

 

Прежде, чем читать и давать слушать своим чадам стихи-сказки Виктора Шамонина-Версенева, Христа ради, почитайте и послушайте их сами

 

Автор: Владимир Шебзухов

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Ребенок, который выучит правильный язык в раннем возрасте, лучше разовьет языковые навыки. Это включает в себя аудирование, говорение, чтение и письмо, contexto что позволяет детям эффективно общаться, понимать окружающий мир и осваивать другие академические навыки. 

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